If you want a succesful recruitment post u should read some of the sticky posts especiallys this one
http://pirate.planetarion.com/showthread.php?t=177654 Also try taking a look at some of the other recruitment threads they will give u an idea on how to make this more successful.
Tell us a little bit about your alliance, when u were formed ect.
What are the requirments for joining, Do i need a payed accounts?
What do u use for communitaction do u work soley in game or do u use things like IRC and MSN
I would like to know more about your alliance if possible