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4 Jan 2003, 02:19
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I can smell steak and chips
And nobody is cooking anything.
I think i am slowly losing my mind.
One piece at a time.
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4 Jan 2003, 02:21
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Guest
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Alternatively in Haiku form:
I can smell steak and chips
No-one is cooking
I'm slowly losing my mind
One piece at a time
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4 Jan 2003, 02:22
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In fond memory of SB
Join Date: Dec 2002
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Quote:
Originally posted by Dace
I can smell steak and chips
No-one is cooking
I'm slowly losing my mind
One piece at a time
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That amused me beyond belief.
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4 Jan 2003, 02:26
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The Twilight of the Gods
Join Date: Jan 2001
Posts: 23,481
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So you like haiku
Well, aint that just great matey.
Oh look, po'm ahoy.
Last edited by MrL_JaKiri; 4 Jan 2003 at 02:35.
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4 Jan 2003, 02:29
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Guest
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Quote:
Originally posted by MrL_JaKiri
So you like haiku
Well, aint that just great matey.
Oh look, poem ahoy.
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5,
7,
6
???
That's not pure Haiku :(
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4 Jan 2003, 02:36
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The Twilight of the Gods
Join Date: Jan 2001
Posts: 23,481
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Quote:
Originally posted by Dace
5,
7,
6
???
That's not pure Haiku
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Not paying attention
You could also alter the last line to say 'poem ho!' if it so pleases you.
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4 Jan 2003, 03:14
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I AM OSCAR WILDE
Join Date: Jun 2002
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why you throw chip
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4 Jan 2003, 16:21
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Stoke
Join Date: Apr 2000
Posts: 92
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Quote:
Originally posted by Dace
I can smell steak and chips
No-one is cooking
I'm slowly losing my mind
One piece at a time
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where is your season?
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4 Jan 2003, 18:13
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Wankoverable
Join Date: Apr 2002
Location: wherever I am
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what exactly is a haiku ?
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4 Jan 2003, 18:16
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Dirte
Join Date: Apr 2002
Posts: 5,573
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Quote:
Originally posted by Flayer
what exactly is a haiku ?
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Some sort of poem, written in a strange style.
Dace, that was class!
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4 Jan 2003, 18:17
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Registered User
Join Date: Jul 2000
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A form of poem or something Flayer, afaik 3 lines in 5-7-5 format. I may be wrong.
Edit: As i was wrong i deleted my own attempt.
Quote:
A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.
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4 Jan 2003, 21:51
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It was a Stupid Dream
Join Date: Jun 2002
Location: Winchester, UK
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Do you know a mod
That can delete this thread please
Its Pretty Pointless
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