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KaneED · 21 Jan 2008, 22:07

Also I think you could better improve your piece by paragraphy better, and making it less of a rant.

Of course if you want to do a rant, make it shorten as people often find rants self-indulgent and hard to read.

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21 Jan 2008, 22:07	#25
KaneED Motherfracker Join Date: May 2001 Posts: 2,985	Re: For all those outthere wanting to hear something about brazil Also I think you could better improve your piece by paragraphy better, and making it less of a rant. Of course if you want to do a rant, make it shorten as people often find rants self-indulgent and hard to read. Give my rep back