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Unread 8 Feb 2006, 20:31   #39
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Re: Find Me A Job...
Mostly, that reads pretty good.

In the effective communication section your sentances are a bit umm. They are about you, but they dont refer to you, if you see what i mean. It's not a major issue, specially if they are bullet points

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the store has shown consistent over performance in relation to KPI targets,
This part of this sentance strikes me as confusing, i'd reword it to something the store has consistently performed above [KPI] targets

(wtf is KPI, and are people gonna know it ?)

Apart from that, seems cool
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