Some of the ascending bass runs on the first one still don't sound quite right harmonically. Apart from that it sounds better.
The second one sounds good, but is still fairly unimaginative rhythmically. I think that the bass line is the main culprit here, but the melody rhythm could use a bit more syncopation to bring it out a little more.
Oh and you can hear at the very end where you hit the mic or there is some interferences on the signal
