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Re: Universal Operations (Yeah, again, please read and review)
Thanks for the comments, after reading that I think I might agree with you that it needs a little more expanding. Some of your points will be answered later on in the story, but I realise that is does look as if the Commander has made a glaring assumption the way things stand.
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