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Originally Posted by zPeti
I've got a revised version in the same place
http://apexwebgaming.com/planetarion/
Apart from the ending where planetarion is really in your face, I don't think MrLobsters banner would work as advertising.
First off, I want people seeing it to know what they're clicking on before clicking (so they will convert better).
I want them to know that this is a serious game, but I have changed obsessive now.
I don't think the actual text used on MrLobster's really mean anything, it might to existing players but not anyone looking at the ad.
So... what do you think of this one? I might still change the Logo to be similar to the ending of MrLobster's banner.
Also, if MrLobster agrees I will try and split test the two banners, see which works better. |
When I compare the two, I prefer MrLobster's form an aesthetic point of view. I think it looks more professional (more like the sort of banner I;ve seen for other games).
I find your banner to visually distracting - text in multiple locations, lots of moving bits.
I have no idea which version would be more sucessful as an advert though.